Friday, October 28, 2011

One More Try Comments

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How can I take back the tears I made you cry?
I'm sorry for every hurtful word, for every single lie
I know I did you wrong, that I won't deny
So here I am asking you for one more try
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Theany Ouy 01 November 2011

A bit sadden, yet profound... in a way where I can feel all your emotions through every lines I read, as you acknowledged your mistakes and asked for forgivness. You deserve a second chance! Nicely written, I enjoyed this wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing...

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