Thursday, July 19, 2012

One More Time, Before I Die Comments

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One more time before I die,
I'd like to walk with you.
To gaze up at your clear blue sky,
Like something fresh and new.
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Juan Olivarez
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Joseph Anderson 26 August 2012

I sure want to go with you.A great flowing song of nature's beauty.Though a lament this was a joyful tribute to read. Just a beaut.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 July 2012

Vivid images of a very beautiful scenery, no wonder you love it so much.

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Heather Wilson 19 July 2012

A beautiful poem, ..hope you have many, many years for your wishes to come true.

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Valerie Dohren 19 July 2012

Beautiful write Juan, but I hope you will have a good many more than one more time. Sounds like a wonderful place to be.

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Smoky Hoss 19 July 2012

Amen brother, me also.

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