Tuesday, July 9, 2019

One More Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

They were sitting across from one another
the room had been quiet for a while
when he glanced at her…she glanced back
and they silently shared a smile.
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Jim Yerman
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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 July 2019

The communication of feelings in the most intimate way has been highlighted in a superb manner with an equally superb conclusion, the realization narrated in last 2 lines. Thanks for sharing a beautiful life song.10 points.

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