One More Time Comments

Where did we both go wrong, about it? My memory of us is vivid, like romance under the sun shadow. And scent of your perfume still strong, as the wash of rainfall under the grey sky- - - - > your words do justice to the lovelorn words, heartache and heartbreak are poetically demanding topics and you handled then well! ! ! ! !

Thank you for reading

I enjoyed this great word flow and indeed a ballad thanks for sharing

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing Brian.