Saturday, August 4, 2012

One More Lie, Before I Sleep Comments

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Just tell me one more lie
Just one more to help me sleep tonight
One more lie
To make myself believe, everything will be alright
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Arianne Owens
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 March 2020

Such a nice poem, Arianne. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan 04 October 2012

Ironically asking for the truth. Lol! Well it's a nice one but I want you to go more deeper in your grammatical application. Keep it up pretty

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Kelvin Owusu 11 September 2012

this is nicely written and tells a truth in a way, although we all want others to be truthful at times we prefer to be comforted by a lie rather then listen to a harsh truth

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Shihabudheen K J 03 September 2012

Lies cannot stand forever but can just stand for few seconds.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 August 2012

What lie is that, that you want to hear! Everything will be all right. we always hear this lie everywhere, not only today to make you sleep.. a truth well told!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 August 2012

What lie is that, that you want to hear! Everything will be all right. we always hear this lie everywhere, not only today to make you sleep.. a truth well told!

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