Sunday, December 6, 2020

One More Dream Comments

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Thinking in a matter of time, never letting go of what is so
important, recalling moments that left intense and great
memories that happened to be thought of over and over.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

Good one. I feel that the poem will have more oomph more feeling if the refrain is repeated at the end of every stanza. You know.....trying to find one more dream to become alive. Thanks for sharing.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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