Thursday, September 18, 2014

One More Day I Say Comments

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One More Day
Written by: Wilfred Charles Mellers
Thursday, September 18,2014
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Wilfred Mellers
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Darlene Walsh 21 September 2014

Your poem sounds very familure to me, there was a time when I wasn't sure I could 'just spend one more day.' But I survived and today life is good. I look forward to reading many more of your poems. In line 10, should People come and the go be read as People come and they go?

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Wilfred Mellers

Wilfred Mellers

Kinston, Jamaica, West Indies
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