Friday, February 17, 2023

One More Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

She stares at her ceiling once again with a hundred thoughts
'Maybe he knows who I am, probably not'
She walks down the hall with her head down low, scared to meet his eyes
Even when she hears his voice she's swarmed with butterflies
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JayJay Maybank
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 March 2023

Totally amazing JayJay

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Fantastic song of love, Emma. The prancing of the poem between "You and I" and "He and She" is really enchanting. And the repetition of a few powerful love-lines. Am I falling in love.. with you …or.. your poems?

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Rob Lamberton 22 February 2023

Moments matter! Thanks for taking a moment to share this beautiful poem with us!

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