Saturday, March 26, 2022

One More Day Comments

Rating: 4.7

The old man flails his torch at time itself
Lost in the dark of nightmares
Confused and bloody minded
He blindly whips at the inevitable
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Phil J Hambling
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Brook Renwick 08 April 2022

Great Poetry! This is my father!

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Smoky Hoss 29 March 2022

Wow, very good. Powerful.

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Richard Wlodarski 28 March 2022

A very thought provoking and deeply moving poem about the Grim Reaper we must all face.

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soren Barrett 28 March 2022

So many people pray for just one more day. Well written and expressed.

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C N Premkumar 27 March 2022

Superior philosophical thought

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C N Premkumar 27 March 2022

The heat of his existence ready to fight For the hope of one more day

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 March 2022

i found some solace in this poem I really enjoyed this one

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Jayne Davies 27 March 2022

Love this! Well done x

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 March 2022

Touching poem. Marvellously pictured the state where man starts to count ‘one more day.' May I invite you to read the poem "A SILENT PRAYER' a translation-on my pages. Thank you.

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