Tuesday, March 25, 2008
One More Day Comments
Rating: ★4.8
I'm so sad and depressed
Is all I want to do is rest
I go to sleep at night
But my dreams I just can't fight
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Reggie fambro mcclain III
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♥ Loved Sunshine Princess♥
07 April 2008
Very NIce writen! Good JOb! KEep up the good work! ;) ~Sunshine
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10/26/2025 12:23:59 PM # 1.0.0
I believe the writer is not quite sure what to write here. There seem to be two messages at once being delivered from his head. Perhaps he needs to write two more focused poems. Anyway. The structure was good and both messages got through. Though neither was as well developed as it could have been. GW62