Monday, September 3, 2012

One More Comments

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Because of thunderous blow
My fortune was poorly scolded
Welcome to better chances
Let me try not to depress!
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Eindaray Kyaw
Betrayal
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Sunny Rose 04 September 2012

I think the title 'One More' is inappropriate by the way you presented your poem I know it's about not giving up and doing it one more to succeed but...i kinda tnink the title doen't suite your poem

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Zero Ro 04 September 2012

Nice one! It's a good spiritual poem.

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Eindaray Kyaw

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