One Million Times Comments

wow...the imagery in this poem is incredible. After my second read I felt every emotion that was described and it was almost as if I wrote it myself. Great write. Loved it. -travis

A write that lets us know your love encounter crashed into ash but you turned it into a big statement...enjoyed the read..wait for the magic carpet will return regards

A young mind with fine words, keep going young lady, and as for love it has a way of finding you, thanks Daniel 10

chloe the sequencing of the phrases is superb; the way you have expressed yourself with aggression is marvellous......great going

Chloe, I love this... but the reason is clear... you write an awful lot like I do... the metaphors, the allegory. Thanks for asking me to read this wonderful poem. Steve