Friday, April 16, 2010

One Love, One Life, One World Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to carry you.

You tell me to stop.
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Adrian Cordova
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Emily Oldham 01 July 2010

i'm really enjoying your poems. this one is brill, loads of people can relate. thanks.

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Sherri Coulter 17 April 2010

I love this poem...one love, one life, one world 'I want to carry you' 'you want to carry me.' 'two wrecks that found each other.' 'we can carry each other' the crux of life.........10+

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