Sunday, September 14, 2008

One Look Back Comments

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Allow me to swim your way
and cast aside morning's ablaze,
these weary fins will controvert pain
for even one's simple name
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Fallen Pieces
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Ameer Mcarthur 17 September 2008

Very enchanting poetry my fallen.im fallen into pieces already! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 September 2008

no waste of words.......astonishing......'one look back'! ...........10

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