Wednesday, July 23, 2008

**one Lonely Night Comments

Rating: 3.1

Love, so blind, blind faith confused
Resentment at being deceived and used
A leap of faith, a common mistake
Emotions shrugged off and abused
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Kesav Easwaran 24 July 2008

those last two lines are more than what they read...painful words, ever could born out of a love broken heart...superb poem, Jon... here you bring out the sentiments marvelously 10

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Its gorgeous Jon, it speaks more so than you can ever know.

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Lynda Robson 23 July 2008

Nice flow to this poem, and hearfelt sentiments, well penned 10 from me Lynda xx

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