Monday, May 6, 2019

One Liners11-20(Musings) Comments

Rating: 5.0

11.'You touch me with love'.'But you sting me with lust'- bee and flower talked

12. Begging is worse yet the worst is not giving alms..But, how to find out the true beggar
...
Read full text

Indira Renganathan
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 May 2019

It should be ' and got' instead of ' and god'. I have inadvertently done it.

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 May 2019

I read all lines from 11th. to 20 th.deeply and god the meaning of all lines. Very interestingly it has been delineated. Beautiful poem.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success