Sunday, July 7, 2019

One Liners 101-110 (Musings) Comments

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101. Rejection should not cause dejection as sometimes rejection is causeless too

102. A promised promise helps the promised person feel a promising support
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When mummy and Nimmy are fighting Jimmy barks in rhyme...It could be a kid's nursery rhyme, but it surely is a fine rhythm that attracts. I love this line particularly though all have their meaning in tact. Indira Ma'm...... a full score!

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 July 2019

I especially liked #103,104,105 (is it because he was all dressed up?) ,109 (I think a cat walks far more gracefully) ...

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Yes Aniruddha, you are right.It is because he was all dressed up and I do agree that a cat's walk is beautifully natural and not an imitated one. Thanks for your comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2019

From 101 to 110, all lines are much interesting and captivating. Beautiful poem is so amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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