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Write comment. Imagination, Javes. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Beautiful poem about grief and hope. Waiting for the sun and it's halo as I try to forget the past and it's shadows. Nice lines.

My hope ain't gonna fade away till I die Will stand on ground till I see clear sky.. I liked the ending Good flow of words and rhyming.. You may like my poem loneliness

clear sky I see, good one