One Last Time Comments

kazi thnx fr d beautiful comment

thnx for these wndrful wrds aamit! ...i'll ponder upon it.. :)

kazi...sure i'll read your poem asap..nd thnx fr a beautiful comment..! !

yoonoos..thnk u! ..

Sorrows mourning the loss of someone.Forget sorrows with the smokes of upcoming Delhi Diwali coz` there are more as sorrows waiting in the wings..You cannot give yourself individual moral support until you get not rid of this-sorrows.Their inertia of resting character is more a foe than the one person who has left you reasonably or another way unreasonably.

'My mind and heart seems to have a fight'______very poetic. Good construction.Words chosen very carefully.Rhythm is there. Thanks. Read my poem and comment.