Monday, September 21, 2009

One Last Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

trying to savour,
the moments
of the waning light'
before season of life
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 02 October 2009

wonderful poem, expressive and beautifully crafted. loved it. thank you.

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Ejaz Khan 28 September 2009

I liked this soft and beautiful poem, very effective write with a great flow!

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I agree with Randy what a lovely piece of poetry this is. There are delightful images throughout and it reads so contained, yet so fluently down the page. Just beautiful....10 love Karin

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Raj Nandy 23 September 2009

This is a lovely piece of poetry! I wonder how I had missed it out initially? ! 10! - Raj

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Jean Dament 21 September 2009

I loved this one with it's great flow, descriptions & imagery. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. It really has heart. Ravensong

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