Saturday, April 12, 2008

One Last Thing To Say To You. Comments

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I'm going to silently crawl away from you.
So you don't have to likeme.
Intead of you leaving and hurting me,
I'll leave you and hurt myself.
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Maura Hunt
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Andrew Basore 16 April 2008

That's rather heartbreaking. It conveys the human nature to shrivle when we become self-counsious and lose self esteem. Nice write, I'm sorry you had to feel like that to write it, though

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Meg H 12 April 2008

I like the emotion that was put into this piece. However, the message slightly disturbs me.

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