Monday, December 15, 2008

One Last Second Comments

Rating: 4.9

One last second is all that I ask
Albeit the years have passed like the
swarms and flocks and schools and tribes
in numbers as great as the pain I have.
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Elbert Matt Loubser
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nomad omnia 06 April 2009

Amazing. It resonates! In my favourites, for sure. N

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

Even the mountains would cry for your love cry.Great piece Elbert.keep it up! ! !

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Luzaan De Bruyn 16 December 2008

YOU REALLY GOT ME INTO TEARS! ! ! GOSH I WOULD KILL FOR A GUY LIKE YOU! ! WELL DONE! ! ! ! ! 10 OUT OF 10 FOR YOU

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 December 2008

Well Elbert you've called on the seasons and elements to declare your love, well done.. Welcome to poemhunter and thanks for the comment.. Andrew 10

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