Sunday, July 6, 2008

One Last Night Comments

Rating: 4.6

I've been thinking for sometime
believing that I'd be alright.
Don't know if I can fight this blight
when I'm all alone at night.
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

a beautiful poem..it seems like the words are mine but you gave it a shape. Keep writing.. GOD bless ya :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

a beautiful poem..it seems like the words are mine but you gave it a shape. Keep writing.. GOD bless ya :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

a beautiful poem..it seems like the words are mine but you gave it a shape. Keep writing.. GOD bless ya :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2008

True love is not easy as we do spell the word 'LOVE' itself; but, we all do have memories too.A very nice piece from you.Bye. E.K.L.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 August 2008

love intense reasons blue night still fluffs by the beauty heart yet cries for the gleams of rain passion bestirs as desccicated on the rune of desire...............wonderfully wrought by ingenious glow within, that splashes the face of dream overpowering the reef of lonliness by the night, yet luscious green by the colors, eloquence of love betides by desire, great write rain when smooches the thirsty dust,10+, thanks for sharing

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Chris Vanbrusselen 17 July 2008

LOVE HURTS, DOESN'T IT? CHRIS.

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Kesav Easwaran 17 July 2008

that's good saying, joan...let the stray continue everlasting in many more days and nights...a poem beautifully expressive 10

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Tsira Goge 06 July 2008

Very beautiful and sentimental poems/// Best wishes, Tsira

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