Friday, November 7, 2008

One Last Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slipping away into the night
Losing my mind to unreasonable fright
Too weak to stand and fight
If I can run, I think I might
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Emo Seb
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Aijaz Asif 07 November 2008

ah one last kiss...another beautiful write seb with nicely floating rhymes...i luvd the way u wrote it, bit dark with the hope of to be loved just once...bravo bravo....10+++

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