Friday, May 1, 2009

One Last Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is nothing without you..
A simple mistake changed everything..
Yes I did love you... but you didn't..
A bad ending for a sweet love story...
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Maya Hershey
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Lean Shami 18 September 2009

How I needed you How I grieve now you're gone In my dreams I see you I awake so alone Anathema_One Last Goodbye

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Lean Shami 18 September 2009

How I needed you How I grieve now you're gone In my dreams I see you I awake so alone Anathema_One Last Goodbye

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Afzal Shauq 15 May 2009

very romantic poem with a sweet and rich meaningful idea..liked it and really an impressive one..hope you like my poems too if go through...yours

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 May 2009

Life must go on.. Life must go on.. Love is hard... Love is good... Or it's just a way of life.. Very sad, I wrote this poem... Every word is real, from the first to the last.... A sad yet optimistic write. Its life, Maya, and it must go on as you said. Please keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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Delicate Heart 10 May 2009

A swaying piece you become lost whilst reading, very tender poem.home is where the heart is..mine ten

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