Thursday, April 19, 2007

One Last Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember when I would hold you here.
I never wanted you to leave.
I only wanted just to keep you near.
Babe, you're the one I need.
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Timothy Lee Hollandsworth Jr.
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Ever Loyal 24 April 2007

Please don't make me cry... ...why does it have to be like this? I don't want to give you one last dance... ...because i don't want it to be our last.

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Brittany Messersmith 21 April 2007

It's beautful it truly is the expression of your soul's desire! i love it! ...i know how you feel i want to tell some one how i truly feel so i just beat around the bush with it..take your own advice just tell her the truth! you know i love ya! tonz of luv, Brittany

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Delilah Miller 19 April 2007

Sounds like a song by Kyo (French artist) Le Dernier Danse. It's lovely, a little bit sad, but poetry is painful sometimes. Hope you keep writing! Xs and Os

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