Saturday, May 16, 2009

One Last Breath Comments

Rating: ★3.0

The snow that shines
Beneath the pines
Has a secret you wouldn't believe
It will enchant and delight you, But has a trick up it's sleeve
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Kyrsten Gaddis
snow
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Jessica Caswell 18 May 2009

its good but the end is the best 'i wont you take that last beath', good

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Corey Rebbechi 17 May 2009

i lyk it not to shabby

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Fearless D 17 May 2009

I like it, but I prefer poems that flow.

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