Tuesday, September 5, 2006

One Kite Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watched a paper kite in colours dressed,
go climbing high into the clear warm air.

It soared way up, and as it so progressed,
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 29 December 2008

This is a lovely piece Ernestine. I'm glad that you explained that solitaire was a bird as I was thinking of the game! (lol) Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 05 September 2006

Another poem full of lift that leaves those still on the ground with open mouths in awe Love duncan X

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Tailor Bell 05 September 2006

flowing structure, description and subject. marvelous introspection. -Tailor

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Raynette Eitel 05 September 2006

This is really lovely, Ernestine. The spirit of this poem soars like that kite. Raynette

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Peter A. Crowther 05 September 2006

Lovely uplifting spiritual poem.

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Tranquil Ocean 05 September 2006

Beautiful poem of despair soaring into hope.....written so well. Love, TO

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Graham Jones 05 September 2006

Excellent Ernestine, I see you have lost none of your touch, this flows very well, much enjoyed.

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