Monday, April 13, 2015

One Is The Morsel... [snacking; Writing Rhymes; Personal; Short] Comments

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One is the morsel I popped into my mouth.
I chewed it, swallowed it, and it’s heading ‘South’.
Now I’ve had six, I think, while writing this verse.
It’s NOT sugar-coated, which sometimes …… is a tooth’s curse.
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Bri Edwards
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Stephen Katona 26 April 2015

You're a true comedien. I must copy your inspiration to write about these sort of moments in life. I apolygise for finding your misfortune funny yet again!

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Rajesh Thankappan 18 April 2015

Taking a cue from Kim Barney, I would suggest walnuts.

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Jak Black 14 April 2015

How do you find the time to write, With such an enormous appetite?

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Kim Barney 13 April 2015

Cashews are much better than cereal that's dry. Taste better, at least, but their fat content's high.

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