Tuesday, May 13, 2014
One In Love Comments
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One in life, one in living;
One in getting, one in giving.
One in sorrow, one in laughter;
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Lorraine Colon
13 May 2014
Loving someone involves a lot of things, doesn't it. One great poem!
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8/2/2025 12:20:28 AM # 1.0.0
I enjoyed the message in your poem. The repetitive use of One in... got to me, distracted from the essence of the poem. Not sure how else you could do it, except maybe consolidate some of the words of two lines at once. Otherwise really good. RoseAnn