Sunday, October 11, 2009

One In A Million Foster Carer Comments

Rating: 5.0

You held my hands since I could barely stand

When it was dark
You paved the way for me to walk
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Joan Denton
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Rajinder Singh 05 November 2009

very lovely and touching

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Daniel Kempson 17 October 2009

Lovely heartfelt write worthy of top marks Daniel

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Lynn Glover 16 October 2009

Joan, this is very beautifully done with terrific rhythem and rhyme. I really enjoyed the flow and the subject of your poem. I love poetry that rhymes and really enjoy reading it. You have done a terrific job and I eagerly await for more. Welcome to Poemhunters. God Bless, your friend, Lynn

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