You held my hands since I could barely stand
When it was dark
You paved the way for me to walk
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Joan, this is very beautifully done with terrific rhythem and rhyme. I really enjoyed the flow and the subject of your poem. I love poetry that rhymes and really enjoy reading it. You have done a terrific job and I eagerly await for more. Welcome to Poemhunters. God Bless, your friend, Lynn
very lovely and touching