Thursday, November 4, 2010

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Rarely can I stand near
And spend time...
Those precious minutes in my life,
Gives me eternal happiness -
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Aishwarya Premkumar
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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Sounds like a truly wonderful unconditional love that frees the soul and takes flight into depths of serenity! Love your style of writing! Thank you for such a beautiful poem! RoseAnn

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Rohan Roy 09 November 2010

its truly magnificent..

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Ratneswar Brahmachari 07 November 2010

Brilliant in chosing words, excellent in crafting, really awesome creation.Write more for us.

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Ken E Hall 07 November 2010

A well written love poem nice to read...you show a lot of promence and now I think next you should come up with something original something you...nobody else give a try...regards

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 07 November 2010

You are very philosophical at this tender age. A gal of teens will write poems on love that is real. Are you more thoughtful than other? Y? more lonely? Your poem shows that you are not social.

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