Rarely can I stand near
And spend time...
Those precious minutes in my life,
Gives me eternal happiness -
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Brilliant in chosing words, excellent in crafting, really awesome creation.Write more for us.
A well written love poem nice to read...you show a lot of promence and now I think next you should come up with something original something you...nobody else give a try...regards
You are very philosophical at this tender age. A gal of teens will write poems on love that is real. Are you more thoughtful than other? Y? more lonely? Your poem shows that you are not social.
Sounds like a truly wonderful unconditional love that frees the soul and takes flight into depths of serenity! Love your style of writing! Thank you for such a beautiful poem! RoseAnn