Thursday, April 17, 2008

One Hit Comments

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you told me over and over that it was just one night
but what if you didn't mention the other five hundred times
he's more than just some boy, he has love, he has a name
but the way you throw it around, I find it hard to believe that you have changed
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Jade Leven
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Bill Smith 17 April 2008

Liked your poem, sometimes we stand by and watch knowing the wreck is about to happen but are left helpless by the knowledge that good intention is often misunderstood smiffy

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I like the title of your piece :) It reminds me of my favourite song - U2's 'One'... I can’t believe it I was just singing it :) Excellent write... Yes, you are right - one hit is enough to destroy love between people... One bowl of goulash can bowl up everything...

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Jade Leven

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