She loved me and I loved her more
Couldn't let her tie me to door
In some ways she was a damn whore
But she was band-aid to my sore
With the addition of your Poets' note, this poem hits the mark. A 10.
Carl, those notes were really necessary for this poem. Thanks for your very positive response!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I did not know this about Jack. It must stem from a deep need for actual love neither of them had access to. So became the proverbial thorn in their side (see St. Paul - EPISTLE TO ROMANS I believe) The outstanding case of fantasized (?) incest: Georg Trakl and his sister - see my poem IN YOUR WORLD
Right on the money, Daniel! I shall read your poem. Thank you so much!