Why these eyes don’t dry?
Why hearts pain doesn’t end?
Why my breath doesn’t stop?
Why? Even after leaving me
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So many questions that left the heart in a stressful situation and the mind in an anguish state....well expressed poem.10+++
no body sould be insulted...... ppl neeed 2 be treated with class.... but nice poem
one can only ask the heart that question. but he heart can only give one response (forever) gr8t write a ten
She came, She saw and She Conquered your Heart to rule; Your Heart is Out of your Control. Feelings expressed so beautifully,
nice anaphora: ''Why? Even after forgetting me My love on you still stays'' lovely poem...10+ from me
questions in fond and questions in pain........... fine write.........
hello sir! ! ! hey i know this feeling.. emotions seems to flow throw your poems.. i really felt this questions.. i mean many people ask these questions from themselves.. and world think they are mentally weak.. i d say you are a person that has genuine feelings! ! ! nice one indeed..10+== with lots of love shan