Tuesday, September 14, 2010

One For You An' One For Me Comments

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Be one young or old, death casts its own spell on all...its charm frightening and awe-inspiring
Now read these short cuddled up lines...
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2020

A wonderful story that grips the reader from start to the end. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.

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Kesav Easwaran 04 February 2020

Thank you Rose Marie. Glad you liked the suspense therein

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2020

Life and death! ! Young and old. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 04 February 2020

Yes. Who isn't afraid of death? Thank you Edward for your nice response

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Luz Hanaii 22 December 2019

Wow! you had me believing they were dividing souls among themselves, so relieved to see the surprise ending and find out it was about apples. You build up the suspense so well, nice posting. 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2019

An apple a day drives the witchcraft away! Thanks for your jovial comment Luz. Liked a lot. Remain blessed

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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