Love that I long
Can never go wrong
I have nourished
To witness fruits before I perish
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I love the thought of this poem. One forever is a remarkable thought that talks about stability; something which is kind of forgotten in the so-called race of change. The poet wishes stability in relationship, which has also become very fragile, hollow and mechanical. In my opinion, the poem is not judgemental, it appears to me as a wish. Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Jun 2,2014