Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, June 1, 2014

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Love that I long
Can never go wrong
I have nourished
To witness fruits before I perish
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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I love the thought of this poem. One forever is a remarkable thought that talks about stability; something which is kind of forgotten in the so-called race of change. The poet wishes stability in relationship, which has also become very fragile, hollow and mechanical. In my opinion, the poem is not judgemental, it appears to me as a wish. Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Jun 2,2014

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Devender Kaur and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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very good William John5 minutes ago Catching Comment +1

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great Michael Zelenke5 minutes ago kinda long but fantastic content Comment +1

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i like it David Paul4 minutes ago but i new what your next line would be some times thats why 4

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Love that I long Can never go wrong

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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