Saturday, November 12, 2005

One Flower Away From The Sun Comments

Rating: 4.9

If I had a flower within me
It would instantly die.
Hidden inside me
There are frozen rooms with no residents,
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Ivy Christou
COMMENTS
Sandra Fowler 31 July 2006

Praise for your courage and your artistry. Wonderful imagery in this one, Ivy. Warm regards, Sandra

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Will Barber 13 May 2006

This poem is moving, and brave. The way down, then the difficult ascent - carrying us with you. Your intensity is frightening, reassuring - in the end, poetic.

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Uriah Hamilton 25 November 2005

Please protect all your lovely petals, this poem is touching!

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Charles Chaim Wax 12 November 2005

a complicated poem but in he nd a hmuan being has no choice but to completely embrace compassion all of it all the time a hard task but life ain't easy fine work

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Max Reif 12 November 2005

Well, whatever it takes. Your statement's positive, in the final analysis. I read something today about someone taking care of a sick dog while planning an assassination. We're not exactly rational. You're paying attention to your heart here, though, and, well, how many things have we all done, through our ignorance, that we have to atone for. All's well that ends well.

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