One Fine Spring Eve Comments

contd. But if allowed a little time that attachment diminishes, and one may view a poem without the heart interfering too much. This is the time to chisel it. This is my experience. I would love to have your and others' comments. Let me add, I liked what I read.

Full of rich imagery and passionate feelings rushing from heart create a poem in its raw form. I don't want to use the word tinkering, but a poem adds to its beauty if chiseled discreetly. Soon as a poem is born the poet may find it perfect. A poet is like a mother who finds her child perfect. ...contd..

Time paused! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Beautiful imagery written throughout the poem. An excellent piece, thank you for sharing.

I looked at your reading patterns on PoemHunter and was surprised to see that you expect other members to read and rate youar poems but you seldom read others and never rate their poems. You need to show more generosity to other people. Pity because your poems are beautiful and show a lot of potential. But popularity will only come your way if you start or reciprocate the actions you want from other members.

A lovely piece of poem- Love and Spring season are very much associated with each other Your poem expresses beautifully the onset of romantic feelings in your heart.Let me quote- A rainbow color couple bird's sings in their moods Their songs attracts like a magnet The old golden yellowish brown leaves falls on my face Felt likes a kiss on my forehead;

A feeling of true loves hugs me tight in its arms A rainbow color couple bird's sings in their moods Their songs attracts like a magnet The old golden yellowish brown leaves falls on my face Felt likes a kiss on my forehead; love and nature are your favourite themes. lovely poem dear poetess. tony

nice thanks for sharing I read many poems you also must so read teno f y poems and comment read more comment more poetry will come like a river for sure