Wednesday, September 5, 2012

One Final Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

To the one that holds my heart so close
Yet fills me with feelings so morose
I ask that once you see the light of day
You change your self-destructive way
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Rebecca Pepper
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Abdallah Gamal 06 September 2012

Outsatnading! you've chosen the words here perfectly that deliver the emotions to the reader's mind and capture him/her in your world.10++

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