Tuesday, June 16, 2009

One Face Before Or After God Comments

Rating: 5.0

You got the world running in circles
Hooked on your world like a drug
Above the no limit if there are so many Gods
So why hasn't one took this world by there hands
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Lee Howlett
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Sonny Faolan 14 August 2009

OMG! ! my friend, if i interpreted your poem properly, i definitely agree with you! i also love the recurrent sentences... repeating those sentences gives a certain musicality to the poem! love it love it love it! ! ! 10/10! ! !

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