One Evening When The Sun Was Low... Comments

very nice write! .................

member: Mary Spain a real achievement to find so many appropriate words ending with 'ow' well done mary

Nice rhyming lines...........

Eloquently expressed with a rich rhyming scheme and a fantastic flow. Well done my friend.

I liked the way it rhymed..well blended... and ofcourse the generosity and the message of kindness is good too.. :)

A well-rhymed tale of simple kindness toward a fellow human being. Lovely!

Very nice, i like the flow. Big 10

This is very nice, Prashant! There you walk, deep in thoughts, 'they had a flow'... but you are interrupted by the sight of this poor man... and you let go of your thoughts... instead you give this man of your warmth... words are only words, anyway... but a helping hand to another human being, could be the difference between life and death... you made the right choice and I am sure the words will return to you...

nice revealing picture of humanity...well done prashanth

another lovely poem of yours. enjoyed reading it. very smooth flow of words. take care

Splendid choice of words! Keep it up! !

'As the darkness began to grow and to its nest got back the crow I knew I had something to draw by moving the brush to and fro...' Beautiful write with full of passion and warmth Well done Enjoyed reading it

It's a poem full of passion and warmth, very well rhymed. You are a kind-hearted person, prashant. Best wishes. Naseer

what a beautiful poem shared here..nice setting and well done! ! !

I think it took ur special mind and special time to rhyme this peom. Well done, i like it @ 10

I think it took ur special time and special mind 2 write this. Well done

He was seeking vigour to warm his weary mind, but when he found his fellow man in the need of something to keep him warm, he was filled with compassion and gave him his shawl. An adorable touching poem.

a heartfelt sincere write about compassion and warmth! well done

Brilliant Prashant! Well done! It rhymed and had good rhythm too and flowed really well, a pleasure to read. Ruthie; o)

wonderful Piece my friend... keep it up * I published a new poem collection that I'd like you to read and leave your valuable comments and precious vote* thank you.....regards