One Evening I Saw The Life- Couplet Comments
One evening on the banks of the river, I saw the LIFE
Flying like a bird, trying to cross the horizon.
One evening in a flower garden, I saw the LIFE,
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The evening you saw in life is truly very beautiful evening that carries light of glorious mind.
Birds fly with due freedom and we realize this truth. The waves dance and nice sensation is made with deep perception. This poem is very interestingly written.
Truly spoken! We can only accomplish so much with one life! But I imagine as a LIFE gets tired and fatigued there will always be another to take its place!
One evening I also saw LIFE crawling to live and it smiled at me. Superb.
Better to keep it simple and remain contented rather than carrying a bag on the the back.
Hunger and to have everything leads no where. One evening in a flower garden, I saw the LIFE, Fluttering like a butterfly, hovering to nectar from all flowers.
We poets are sensitive to all happenings. One evening at the poetic show, I saw the LIFE Plummeting like the candle and spreading lights.
We expect so much from LIFE and we repent later. Thought provoking couplets. Good one, I liked it.
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7/28/2025 2:59:49 AM # 1.0.0
We expect too much from the life don't we? Brilliant poem.