One Evening Comments
...Out of some irrepressible urge of talking, I tried to talk to a sparrow, a daily guest who used to sit on my window frame and sometimes hopped on to some twig of the only uncared for tree, a loner like me. I was bold enough in my attempt as if to disturb her calm and poised loneliness, but as I called her she did not pay attention to me; I was shocked, humiliated, I felt my thoughts dying inside,
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“It is the evening that questions thus from within me.” ? Friedrich Nietzsche... Self satisfaction is very important in life which this line depicts that ... though my hand was never held but it was enough that my hand was a holding one...
the poems of fate composed in the long and short curved lines, and to study such a great task with different creatures creates a mesmerisation on total natural phenomenon thro this write. certainly this write is then possible only when heart mind n soul is totally detached with worldly affairs and attached with the divine solitude. a great philosophical write with deep sense n thoughta.a grt poetic talent is exhibied thro this write.my sister keep your imagination in full swing.
sweet I meant pure flow like the every thing that comes out of nature not fake bravo Shahzia and thanks to share this piece of art shine like moon I see in all images yours beauty
in greedy i found one good thing when the mind heart are greedy in need more and more for knowledge and in lonely nights grace of sharping my sense of unfilled soul for the beauty and art/ Oh Shahzia it is quit sweet and easy like the nature it self Masha'Allah
the last verse of your poem is so nicely written great write Shahzia
Beautiful poem Shahzia..The ending so beautifully you have portrayed, that I could visualise it...
Nice poem set in prose. Reads like the book of life. You held the hand just when it was needed. Thank you.
This one could be one of my favorite of yours, where your mind wandering to search where your soul traveling around the life. I like the connection you created here and how it awaken us as a soul owner_Soul
We are part of nature but we have to connect with it and appreaciate its beauty to make sense of our lives. A good write.
ahh...the connection of man with the nature is immortal...finding solitutde and peace is the deepest desire of any poet and author...talking to a sparrow highlights the state of lonliness and absorption that the author was lost in imagination and out of pain wanted to share her feelings with a bird which is simply unavailable to this lost soul. it seems as if the author has something deep inside her and she wants to burst out or explode not with a bang but with tears bcz she is neither fed up from the attrocities of this world nor happy with the existing phase...she needs a company of all tose who have the same feelings and share common pains...this piece of writing is really a voice of every emotionally intelligent man in this world: -)
There is a sacredness in tears. They are not a mark of weakness, but of power. They speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. They are the messengers of overwhelming grief, of deep contrition and of unspeakable love.” ? Washington Irving A beautiful write, in quest of company you find an answer as luminous as the moonshine: warm the hearts...
Sparrow, butterfly, moon all are attractive to any body for kids its more to see them not always for all but we have to raise our head...justification...understanding others need/ now butterfly haughty difficult to catch by the kids as they are behind..desire of kids and desire of us we run /moon up there give up light at night performing duty we forget concluding hand should be holding one I must support I must help I must indulge in Charity and charity got many way love to read this prose nice of you thank you
It's a complete piece, so symbolic with beautiful diction and lovely metaphors! ! ! After reading this, i must say you are not only a great poet but a great prose writer as well and i loved this heart felt write. The undying urge to talk to someone, inhours of loneliness, is beautifully described with full on emotion and feeling. The ending just touched my soul. I opened the book of my joined hands and started reading the poems of fate composed in the long and short curved lines, .. brilliant work. Blessings
An extremely meaningful and touching write. Felt sad read these heart felt words.
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7/31/2025 7:14:29 PM # 1.0.0
A beautiful write! ! Human soul endeavouring to connect itself with the animate and inanimate objects of Nature! Regardless of how they treat you, you are ready to take them all into your fold...'my hand a holding one'! Such a person will not have to stay a loner! Thanks, Shahzia for your nice words! !