Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, October 27, 2014

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Above all relations
Stands one equation
How much do we care about neighbor?
Rush for help and call for
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Roseann Shawiak 27 October 2014

Such a wonderful and heartfelt poem, Hasmukh! One Equation, sums up your poem eloquently, bringing all thoughts into one conclusion to help all of humanity, not just those we love. Society needs our help also, if we are all to exist in a positive environment, one that fights evil and injustice for everyone. Reach out and help everyone feel the love and caring of community, not only family. Very wonderful message Hasmukh, an intense poem that everyone should heed. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Amen, thats it! 3 hours ago by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost) | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

M. Houston xvery nice. 51 minutes ago by M. Houston | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

good seemekc seemekc3 hours ago Loving one another is a gift for both parties ..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Fine consideration but... roger houlding3 hours ago I found this hard to read. The rhymes felt forced and slightly off key.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Fine consideration but... roger houlding3 hours ago I found this hard to read. The rhymes felt forced and slightly off key.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Above all relations Stands one equation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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