Thursday, February 18, 2016

One Enduring Wish! Comments

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I walked at ease in the mild serein,
In morn I went there,
Was a rebarbative jiffy,
And tedious as well.
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Navod Jayasuriya
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2018

And of course with butterflies of captivating arts, Like in modern fashions of groovy styles, Fluttered as the sparkling and dazzling, glitters of flashes. poets efforts of meeting her took him to the village graveyard.. sad at the end, . you have written a great poem dear poet friend. thank u. tony

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Nosheen Irfan 27 February 2016

Very mature n beautiful work. I love its theme. The passage of time, the journey from childhood to old age changes everything. But the poetic heart always longs for the old times n lives in them. Death is a reality, a sad reality that you have highlighted in this poem. Well penned. Lovely imagery.

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Navod Dilhara 29 February 2016

Thank you for perceiving it and commenting it, Irfan,

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