Saturday, March 17, 2012

One Earth`s Angel Comments

Rating: 4.8

From silent, magic, hopeful wood
A lot of spirits look at us,
They know about wrong and good,
They grow of fortune virgin grass.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Harindhar Reddy 18 March 2012

This poem is simply superb as you displayed your magnetic touch with spirits. It is too good and beyond the words of expression..... They are a wisdom, Heaven`s part. We cannot find the wood on map.

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Wahab Abdul 17 March 2012

''Today he started holly way Forgive his friends and found his love, ''.......................the poem ends with the optimistic notion of life....the angel blessed him and guide him to lead a holy life....................the phraseology of the poem is notice worthy '' the virgin grass'' is one to give an example of this.

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You are a really good storyteller in poem writing...hahaha...like it a lot :)

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