Thursday, June 14, 2007

One Dismal Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The veins of lightning
In unusual brilliance
Sewn from the dark angry sky
The distant laughter
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Little Star
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Cyrina Moon 27 July 2007

LIttle Star, you have exploded into brilliance in this fine poem of vivid story architecture with variegated intense shades of charcoal grey, silver sparkle. I can even smell the atmosphere and apprehension. Love your unique timing/rhythms in all of your work. I've read and enjoyed several of your poems. Cy

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Theresa Moore 14 June 2007

I love the visual and audio senses portrayed in your poem.

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