Sunday, April 23, 2017

One Dish Party Comments

Rating: 4.5

It's a one dish party, help yourselves,
Dishes made by chefs I see on the shelves,
By a famous builder it has been organized,
As usual the media has too much criticized,
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Khalida Bano Ali 25 April 2017

Enjoyed this metaphor..........................................................

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 April 2017

'In a vast garden'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 April 2017

A thought provoking poem. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 April 2017

Fairies with sloppy contours difficult to hold, . Rivers are dancing like fish in memory of silver and gold. Wonderful imagery is drawn in this poem. This dish party helps more. Very thoughtful as well as thought provoking poem is shared here.10

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