Monday, September 24, 2007

One December Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

Far brighter than the suns's sharp rays,
Far larger than immense,
A pinpoint perforates the haze
A thousand light years hence.
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Yen Cress
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Ivan Donn Carswell 29 September 2007

Yen, there is a majesty in your writing that impresses as much as the words excite. A powerful and lingering impression of contained imagery. Rgds, Ivan

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Lucianne Fasolo 24 September 2007

I liked this, it was so pretty! I'm not religious, but your poem sounded very nice! 'Far larger than immense' This was interesting. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it, :) Great work!

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Elysabeth Faslund 24 September 2007

Oh, but you have put into words a grand thing! Realization of the immense time span above us mortals! We have only to look up to see infinity...as our far ancestors did, with the same awe. Wonderful work! ! xxElysabeth

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